Kamis, 20 Maret 2014

It Started From A Comic


Tugas Bahasa Inggris 2
A story with Past Tense, Present tense and Future Tense

Present Tense - Bold          
PastTense - Under Line            
Future Tense - Italic

Name   : Shinta Amelia Dwiputri
Class     : 3eb18
NPM     : 29211160

It Started From A Comic


Hi,,, I’am Yue Shinry, my friends call me Shin. I'm a sweet girl, imaginative, fun, and cute according to my friends. I'm 17 years old and currently a student at the same high school as Kyosuke. Aside from being a student, I'm working as a professional comic artists, under the pseudonym Shiya Shinry. Rena is the only one who knows of my profession. I started my career as a comic maker since junior high school, until now I've had a lot of works. Most of them are the story of family, friendship, and relationship between parents and children. However, this time an editor asked me to make a comic with a different theme, it is a romance story with a cool man as the main character. I was shocked of it, because I don't know much about romance. I also have never tasted or felt interested in dating the opposite sex other than feeling.

When I was thinking about the storyline of the comic that I will make, I heard shouting sounds all around me. All the girls scream and gathered in front of the window to see the trio popular guys in my school who are playing basketball on the school ground. Rena had come to take me to see them. And at that point Rena whispered to me,"you must see the three of them, they are the most admired guys by the rest of the girls in our schools". Rena told to me that they are guys, who according to perfect figures, for me to make them the cast of cool and hottie guys in my comic. I went straight to draw sketches of their faces for my comic.

After the bell sign rings, I rushed to the library to make a draft of my comic. Rena said to me, ”Hei Shin, why don't you try dating, because if you are dating you will know how it feels to love someone and your comic stories will have more soul or feeling?”. After Rena said it, I thought about what she said. Hm, it's true ... anyway I haven't dated with someone yet, but maybe that way I can make my comic more alive.  


The next day at the break time, I went on to make a draft for my comics in the library, and after that when i want to return to the classroom as the Bell rings, I had accidentally crashed into a bleeping Tomoya Okita, a member of a trio most popular guys in school. I was speechless for a moment and was immediately rushed off to class because the bell passes the next lesson had been rang. Arriving at home I just realized I forgot to even apologize for accidentally bump into him and I also just noticed that the draft has been dropped when I was collided with Okita.


After I realized, I went straight to the library to look for my comic draft which fell here. When I arrived at the library, I was surprised to see the Trio popular guys there, they consist of Tomoya Okita is a handsome guy, smart, cool and has an aura that makes the women captivated by it, and the second is nice and a sweet guy, his name is Akagi Hikaru, the latter is Sasuke Kurosawa, cool and sporty guy. Then they asked me "Are you looking for this? (while holding a book containing the draft), "Okita said. I hastily replied: "That's mine". And I realized that I was in a trouble when they ask "Did you make this?, You're a comic artist??", They would have seen it,  I was so nervous and scared if its known to the school. "Yes, I made it. I beg you, please hide this from the school and from the others ". Handsome trio replied, "Okay", and that moment is the beginning of my close relationship with them.

In the night, I thought about what was said by Rena and makes me want to try it. Finally in the morning I ventured to meet with Okita and expressed "Okita, will you be my boyfriend?, So I can make an interesting comic, help me, please!". Then somehow Okita replied OK . I love it and thanks to him. Then somehow suddenly I've asked to Oki, "Okita why don’t you have a girlfriend?, but actually every day there must be girls to express their feelings to you?". However Okita just smiled at me. "After school I would come to your class Shin, I'll take you home". "Ok,. Okay " . I replied happily. In the way home Okita asked me the reason I love making comics . Finally I told him about the ups and downs of becoming a comic artist . "I like drawing manga since childhood, with a drawing I can illustrate and convey what do you want to express/share, can be expressed either directly or not, in the work of any manga I can convey the messages or the mandate message of life , we can share happiness and our feelings to the reader. Indeed, in making comics I should be able to divide my time as best as possible, I uses my spare time to draw and also I had to stay up all night to make it . But all my labor and my weariness will be gone if my work is received by the editor and he said very satisfied with my comic. All of that will be paid off when I received a lot of letters and read the letters from all my fans who motivated me to always make the comic better so i don’t disappoint them".

In the next morning, I ask Okita and his friends "Please tell me about the secrets of guy who is in love!" . The handsome trio was answered " Well , ... starting with the signs that a guy is in love , feel happy when they see people like, feel happy when nearby, giving more attention to the her or make excuses for close to her , if she was nearby the rhythmic heartbeat will be faster than usual , and if he doesn’t meet with someone he loves, then he will be feel homesick if you miss someone love you. Guys who are in love will usually also be willing to do anything for the person who likes" . After that , I watched the couples around us , I explore how the way he talked , how his gaze , gesture or gesture of the couple who are in love . Okita then suddenly said to me , the first thing you do is hold hands while courting , Oki hold my hand. Somehow i feel different feeling, something else before I felt. This feeling makes my heart beat very fast. And somehow instantly feel happy and I feel my heart feel warm when there is a nearby.

***

Today is the day where I have to submit a draft of my comic to editor, her name is Shizu. I heard her response to my comic; the editor says that my work is very good. I felt very pleased when I heard it. I cant wait to tell this news to Okita, members of trio populer, and especially to Rena~chan. I was immediately called Rena and asked her to meet me. Our conversation began. I tell the good stuff to the Rena, she congratulated me. Further Rena said "Have you told this to Oki? You should thank him for his help because you can make a good comic. “I’ll tell him later tonight", I replied. Rena replied "Then starting tomorrow the agreement between you and Okita will end? You don’t need to pretend dating again" . Rena heard the words, paused for a moment and I feel very sad inside. I just realized that I have completely fallen in love with Okita. I couldn’t stop my tears, I really did not want this day to come, I want to go back to the time when we are together. This heart feels painful considering I'm not going to get close to him again. Rena was immediately hugged me and tried to calm me.

In the evening I met with Oki and said that my comic was complete and my editor was very satisfied with my comic. Oki smiled at me and said "I am very happy to hear that, congratulations, you are great Shin". "Oki thank you for your help and the help of your friends who have told me about what I need", I said. That night was the last night of Oki as my boyfriend, because according to the agreement of our relationship will end after the dateline of my comic, and I will live my days as usual without Okita as my boyfriend. Somehow my days felt different, felt empty without him. The pain tormented me, the affection I can not control, these hearts are eager to have it. But I know my closeness to Oki for some time and then only under the agreement, he just wants to help.

A week after the incident, in the event in school art contests, Okita expressed his feelings to me. But I responded with no serious, and I said very unlikely if you're like me, I'm just a regular girl, not pretty and unattractive, while you're handsome, smart and cool, you're more in tune with a beautiful girl, smart and dazzling.  "I don’t need a beautiful and fascinating girl, all I need is you, I love you Shin. You are cute and appealing to me. To be honest I 've liked you from the beginning but I'm afraid you will reject me, and when you asked me to be my girlfriend, I was very happy because it means I can be closer to you and get to know you", said Okita.

After hearing the Okita’s statement, I realized that love is difficult to guess, that love does
n’t know the exact size, doesn’t look pretty or handsome person, but love that can only exist in someone who saw sincerity and accept others as they are. Finally today I officially date Okita and become true lovers without having to have binding agreement between us.

Created by: Shinta Amelia Dwiputri

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